Thursday, December 30, 2010

Fresh Pages and Resolutions

"We will open the book. Its pages are blank. We are going to put words on them ourselves. The book is called Opportunity and its first chapter is New Year's Day." Edith Lovejoy Pierce

I love New Year's Day! I love the idea of reflection and fresh starts. I'm an optimist, a spring baby and partly Scottish (bad Robbie Burns reference). I can't help it. Every year I spend a good week prior to the big day meditating on my successes and failures...taking stock of all the things I said I was going to accomplish and did while learning from what I didn't do so well and letting go. And of course, there are the resolutions.

My resolutions have been a work in progress these last several months. Through coaching my clients and writing this blog I am more resolute than ever with the notion that we are the editors of our lives. It IS a major element of my coaching, after all. A poet will tell you every word counts in their craft. Fiction writers know that every action, every nuance in scene, every characteristic of their protags and antags must serve a purpose. I feel more and more that every action I take in my life must serve a purpose. I'm not talking about micro-management here, writers - what a creativity killer! Rather, I'm talking about placing a more intense focus on where time is spent, how it's spent and choosing positive activity that brings value to my life or the lives of those around me (which is also totally cool). Every action must serve a purpose; they must bring forward motion through enlightenment, peace, clarity or happiness. Where do I need to apply the red pen and cut the fat, so to speak? What do I need to expand, flesh out?

Many bestselling and award-winning authors have contributed their personal success stories, insights and tips here on this blog (for free, I might add), to help you all gain perspective on the creative and publishing processes as a whole. They found success through an unparalleled confidence in their ability and clarity of mind. All of them know writing is a discipline and have consistently bettered their craft and approach to the publishing industry by doing what it takes to be a good writer and persevering through the rough spots. It took time. And it all started with a singular passion and a good deal of focus.

Some people make resolutions and stick to them. Others plan grand, virtuous courses then revert back to their old ways a few weeks or months into the New Year. I like to look at resolutions as a work in progress...something you've decided to commit to for the long haul, perfecting as you go, not a quick fix to an old problem.

This New Year pace your selves. Understand success is something you build day by day. Doing everything necessary to become a better writer and building your author platform takes years. There is no race but there is action. Everyday there is action that should move you forward with your craft, with your goals, adding value and richness to your writer's life as a whole.

This New Year, I wish for you all to truly enjoy and fully engage in your creative life!

Here's to 2011!


Friday, December 24, 2010

Happy Holidays

Whatever you celebrate, I wish you a peaceful, joyous holiday filled with light, love and many blessings in the New Year!

Next week, I'll wrap up the month recapping the Lit Coach journey so far and reflect a bit on what lies ahead in 2011.

Happy Holidays!


Monday, December 20, 2010

Q&A with The Lit Coach

Q: I have experienced the most unbelievable couple of years. Honestly! It includes an appearance on a Dutch reality show and has been capped off by my having been detained in, and subsequently denied entry into, a foreign country just yesterday for having made a sarcastic comment to the border agent. To go along with this I have, what I've been told, a talent to write. If there is a god, he or she wants me to write a book. Either that, or he really, really doesn't want me spending time in Europe.

I need an agent. Someone to help me craft the most saleable book possible. Is it possible to attain an agent without a completed manuscript? How?


A: You share a similar predicament with many new writers, well, not the border mishap (on second thought…) but possessing the talent to write and not knowing where to start or how to direct it. And like you, many writers would love to start with an agent in the hopes the agent can somehow direct them into writing a super saleable book, one of which that agent will turn around and sell to a publisher. While some agents can’t help but step in and offer direct creative development advice to new writers upon meeting them, (as this former agent is VERY prone to do…and which I DO do in depth with my clients who are just starting out), agents simply don’t have time to help shape your yet to be forged creative path.

An agent’s job is to acquire your completely finished and polished novel or nonfiction proposal, most likely guide you through some edits to get it to their standard and then submit it to the most appropriate editors for your work. After they sell your work (fingers crossed!), they’ll stick with you through the entire publishing process making sure your book is presented to the public in the best possible way. That’s how they earn their 10-15% commission.

Now. I’m reading and hearing quite a bit about agents who do counsel new writers on how to shape their writing careers, as well as offer evaluative and editorial services on the side for fees. This worries me. Those who are in favor of this seemingly shifting paradigm call it “evolution” but something stinks about it. When I was an agent, I followed AAR’s Canon of Ethics, a list of standards put in place by those in the publishing industry to help writers protect themselves and their work and to help agents keep good business practices. Most of the best agents in the country do follow these ethics and are either members or openly state they follow the Canon. The Canon states, members may not charge fees for reading, evaluative or editorial work unless in a writers’ conference setting. Anything else seems muddy to me and the risk of a writer to be taken advantage of by an agent who needs to make money to keep being an agent seems probable. And what about their actual clients who need their books sold? I’ll probably write more about this topic in the future, but for now I can tell you that the best agents who earn their living from selling their clients’ work are still doing just that. Call me a traditionalist.

Kelly, what you can do over time is decide where your writer’s heart truly lies through reading, writing and reflection. I’ve read your blog - you’re quite funny and a pretty good writer. With blog development, it’s all about content and consistency. You identified yourself to me as a funny writer who seems to have unusual experiences, sometimes in unusual places…great hook! So, your blog needs to be about that! The best blogs are story driven – so tell us a great, funny story and keep ‘em coming on a regular basis. I’d subscribe to that!
Hope that helps! Good luck.

Q: How do I query memoir?

A: Just as you would a regular nonfiction project. What’s important here, though, is your hook because memoir these days are very story driven…not just “hey folks, this is my life.” The old tell all memoir has given birth to some very exciting subgenres of memoir: travel memoir – Almost French; cooking memoir – The Hunger: A Story of Food, Desire and Ambition and memoir’s first cousin, humorous essay – Me Talk Pretty One Day. Even though it’s nonfiction, you’re still telling a story, so make it a good one. You also want to consider the organization of your memoir; will it be linear or will it read as a collection of short stories tied together with a common thread? Some of my favorite memoirs read like a novel because the author’s retelling of their lives is that moving, compelling, engaging or funny.

Check out the covers of some of your favorite memoirs and notice how the brief overview teasers draw you in. You’ll capture an agent’s attention with an equally compelling overview of your memoir.

To read more about how to query nonfiction, check out these books:

Author 101 Bestselling Nonfiction: The Insider’s Guide to Making Reality Sell by Rick Frishman and Robyn Freedman Spizman

A Writer’s Guide to Nonfiction by Elizabeth Lyons

Writing The Perfect Book Proposals: 10 That Sold and Why by Jeff Herman and Deborah Levine Herman

Good luck, KA!

Have a fruitful, exciting holiday week, writers!


Monday, December 13, 2010

Persistence: Hurdling the Obstacles

Persistence is the thing that truly defines your success. It's also one of the most challenging virtues to follow. Most successful writers I know have come toe to toe with a few hurdles and chose to jump them rather than turn back. Can you imagine some of your favorite authors just deciding to quit because figuring out a way to move ahead was too....hard? So then, why would you consider it?

Recognizing your challenges is your first step toward success.

Here are three of the most common hurdles you'll face in your writer's life and how to get over them.

Hurdle 1: Lack of Confidence

Maybe I'm just not that good is what you'll most likely say right before you give up writing for good, this time. You've written and re-written your work, sent it out, had it rejected, meanwhile months, maybe a year (or more) go by and you're still unagented and unpublished. Welcome to the writer's life, my dears! Sometimes it takes months and years for any real success to flow toward you despite your best efforts. If you've read last week's post with Monica Drake (bestselling author of Clown Girl), you know it takes more than talent to get a book published; it takes the wisdom to pull back your novel/proposal from circulation if it needs more work and the willingness to just keep sending it out no matter the rejections that may come your way - rejection is just part of the writer's landscape.

So if it's really an issue of not being that good, THEN GET GOOD! You've got time! You don't need an MFA to write compelling fiction and you don't need a mega following to write a great nonfiction book proposal (although it will help you attract the attention of a publisher), but you DO need a solid understanding of how to write saleable fiction or nonfiction by doing the following: READ the competition; WRITE as much as you can; RESEARCH what you don't know; CONNECT with other writers; REPEAT. Even after you've found success, repeat.

Hurdle No. 2: Life Unravels
Well, you write what you know and sometimes that page is full of drama. Sometimes it gets the better of you. What I've learned so far is that drama doesn't stop happening, you just have to deal with it and make the best choices you can to move ever forward. When the drama happens, and I mean big drama...heartbreak, illness, death, family upheaval...resist the urge to forever hang up your pen. Give yourself the space you need to process whatever is going on, whatever you're feeling, then come back to your writing. It would be such a shame to give up something you love so much because of a drama overdose. Just give yourself time. More importantly, get the help you need. Time and the right support will get you through the rough spots.

For the minor dramas, remember, sometimes it's your own action or reaction that puts you in that yuk place. If you find yourself always saying Life isn't fair! take a step back and really see what's going on with your life picture. What could you do differently for a more favorable outcome? The world isn't out to get you, so it's not the world's fault. And sure, stuff does happen to you that's not of your making, but you can either react negatively and really wallow in self loathing or toss yuk to the side, look to your horizon and keep pushing forward. It's your choice.

Hurdle No. 3: Fear

Fear puts the brakes on progress quicker than anything clever I can think to write here. Fear of rejection, ridicule, fame, success, loss of creative control (when it comes to mainstream publishing), will stop many writers from moving their work forward when it's finished...and some will never finish, rather they'll keep revising, editing their work to death because they're afraid of the next step. That next step is an event with an unknown result and that's scary territory for many writers. Some of you don't even know it's fear that's keeping you back. You just think it's good old procrastination.

The first thing you can do is recognize your fear and realize this feeling is your response to the possibility of you moving out of your comfort zone, where it's nice and cozy. Then realize progress is growth. You've done a heck of a lot of growing to get to this point, right? Why stop now? Even when you're selling loads of books, you're still going to be pushing yourself to the next level, the next zone because you're progressing, getting better. It's ok to enjoy where you are right now, but be ready to move out when you've outgrown your digs...and look forward to your success!

If you're afraid of failing, of just not getting it right, head to the biography section of your local bookseller or library and start reading the life stories of some of our greatest achievers. You'll see their lives were fraught with failure. Then you'll read about their sweet successes after what seems to be a lifetime of hard knocks. The difference between them and the "failed" writer? They didn't give up! Nothing new here, writers, but it seems to need repeating.

Most successes are a result of trial and error. Do you love writing enough that you will persevere through the rejection, life's greatest dramas, the fear of the unknown? Will you do what it takes to become a better writer? Will you keep your eye on the horizon? Don't quit. Don't give up. Keep moving forward, whatever it takes. Persist!

* I should note, not every writer's life is fraught with rejection and drama. This blog post is intended to help those who have yet to remove the obstacles that have thus far remained in their path.

Your Action: Pinpoint the issue that's keeping you from moving forward. Study it from every angle, put a name on it, get nose to nose with it. Commit to yourself that you're going to address this issue and move forward with your work. The New Year is coming, in the Western world. Time for fresh starts. What will yours look like?

Have a powerful, fruitful, creative week, writers!


Friday, December 10, 2010

Next on The Lit Coach's Guide

Next Monday on The Lit Coach's Guide we'll take a look at the issues that sideline even the most productive writers as we continue our focus on Persistence in a writer's life...and what they do to get back on track (and you can too!).

Haven't read author Monica Drake's excellent blog contribution yet? Take some time to read today. Monica's journey in persistence is truly inspiring. Had she stopped at the first couple of hurdles, she wouldn't be a bestselling author and her novel, Clown Girl, would never have been optioned by SNL's Kristin Wiig!

Also, I'm collecting your questions for another round of Q&A with The Lit Coach. If you have any questions about the writer's life, process, agents, publishers, book selling and promotion, ask me! One question only, please. Questions due December 18th.

Have a wonderful, stress-free weekend, writers!

Happy Holidays!


Sunday, December 5, 2010

Persistence: A Blogshop with Bestselling Author of Clown Girl, Monica Drake

Why do you want to publish? Be honest. Publishing is hard work! Months and years of real time could be spent on just one book from inception to glossy bound cover with attention grabbing blurbs. You'll spend hundreds to thousands of dollars on extra copies of your book, website, book promotion and events. You've heard it before, getting your book published and being "the author" is a full time job with no guarantees and it's true.

Most new authors don't truly realize how much of themselves they'll give to their publishing career. Somewhere in the middle of their first book's journey, maybe it's when they're wrapping up edits or when they're synching publicity efforts between their publicist and publisher's PR team, they realize two things: I can't believe how much work this is!; and, I can't believe this is all finally happening!! As a former lit agent, I fielded plenty of calls from my authors for both these occasions. I was thrilled right along with them, after all, I loved their book, too, and worked hard at selling it. As a consultant and coach, I prepare writers for this reality before they find themselves in it.

Writers ask me all the time what the secret is to getting a book deal. Who do you gotta know? "What's that writer doing that I'm not?" they'll ask. The difference between those writers who finally published their book and sell actual copies to unknown book buyers is they did not quit. They didn't quit sending out query letters to agents, they didn't quit reshaping their novel or nonfiction proposal until it was just right, they didn't lose hope when their agent forwarded them scads of rejection letters from publishers. And when their agent lost hope and let them off the rope, they didn't quit putting their work in front of other agents or in bestselling author Monica Drake's case, on publishers' desks.

I asked Monica to share her path to publication story for her debut novel, Clown Girl, with us because I'm always intrigued by unique storytelling and how that brand of storytelling, if you will, finds its way to the shelf among countless more "commercial" titles. Her story is one of Persistence, our virtue focus this month.

Monica: I finished writing my first novel, Clown Girl, after working on it every day for three years. I had just turned thirty-three. Thirty-three, the “Jesus year,” seemed the perfect time to sell a novel: I could still be considered a young author. For some reason, age matters in the publishing industry. I’m not sure why, but we all feel it. There’s a rush to get out a first novel, then a second. Prizes are geared toward age ranges, as in “Thirty Under Thirty,” and “Ten Authors Under Ten Years Old.”

A kind of quiet panic can set in. If you let it, the rush to publish can overshadow the process of writing.

My manuscript was a beautiful stack of 250 pages, and I slid it into an envelope, dropped copies in the mail. I sent it to agents the same month that I signed up for “call waiting” on my home phone. Both the writing and call waiting paid off: a day came when three agents called, at very the same time.

It was unbelievable. My heart pounded in my chest; I juggled agents on my new call waiting system. I felt lucky and smart and ready for success. My writing career had started to take root. I chose an agent, and soon she circulated my manuscript with publishers.
In my mind I sang just sell, just sell. I was ready to go.

But the time frame of my ambitions and the pace of the creative process were not one and the same.

“There’s no reason to publish such a sad story,” the first publisher’s rejection note read. My agent passed the note along to me. I tossed that one off. “This book is tragedy upon tragedy,” the second rejection said. Tragedy? I was baffled. I write comedy. So I had a clear audience problem; I had to rethink the manuscript. After a few more rejections, I asked the agent to pull the manuscript, bring it back for revision. It was a hard decision to make. I told myself I’d find the problem, fix it quickly, tap it all into place, and get back in the game.

It was three years later when I finished a revised version of Clown Girl. This one was better than the first. The book had a new shape, a clearer story arc, an increased sense of focus. It rocked. I was thirty-six. I’d moved from call waiting to a cell phone. I found a new agent. Again, the manuscript went out.

“Beautiful prose,” the editors wrote, “but why doesn’t the narrator have more of a job?” A job? She had a job. She was a clown, but I’d erred on the side of subtlety. Again, I realized I hadn’t made my point clear. After a few more rejections, I pulled the manuscript out of circulation. It felt like giving up, but it wasn’t. The book wasn’t ready. My plan? I’d take the book back, quickly tap it into place…

Three years later, as I turned thirty-nine, I had what turned out to be the final, and eventually saleable, version of Clown Girl. Dreams of publishing in my thirties morphed into dreams of publishing by forty. This time, instead of working with an agent I placed the novel on my own.
Clown Girl found a home with Hawthorne Books; the first print run sold out immediately. Now it was the book I’d set out to write all along. I’d taken the time necessary.

For me, writing a first novel was a decade-long learning experience. What I learned is that while ambition and eagerness can be motivating, it can also get in the way. These days I hear other writers with that same combination of drive, ambition and anxiety. “I’ll write a quick Y.A. novel,” they say. Or, “I have a manuscript I could fix it up. It’s almost done.” I know the feeling.

Maybe their work is almost done. Or, it could be another decade. Writing projects find their own time frame. Good writing, from what I’ve seen, takes dedication, mental muscle and most of all, time.

Your Action: Think about Monica's story then think about your own motivations for writing and wanting to publish. Do you love your work so much that you will absolutely see that it gets published one way or another? More importantly, do you respect the craft of writing enough to know when your work needs more than a few quick taps to get it truly ready? Persistence is more than never giving up, it's also a bottomless desire to improve as an artist.

Keep moving forward, my dears.

Have a fruitful week!


About the Contributor:

Monica Drake has an MFA from the University of Arizona and teaches at the Pacific NW College of Art. She is a contributor of reviews and articles to The Oregonian, The Stranger, and The Portland Mercury. Her fiction has appeared in the Beloit Review, Threepenny Review, The Insomniac Reader, and others. She has been the recipient of an Arizona Commission on The Arts Award, The Alligator Juniper Prize in Fiction, and a Millay Colony Fellowship, and was a Tennessee Williams scholar at Sewanee Writers Workshop.

Her bestselling debut novel, Clown Girl, is published by Hawthorne Books and has been optioned by SNL's Kristin Wiig. Click here to see an interview with Monica from Portland's Wordstock, from Boise Weekly. Click here, to also see a trailer for a short film by Andy Mingo , based off Monica's short story, Georgie's Big Break, filmed at Portland's literary festival, Wordstock.

Thursday, December 2, 2010

Next on The Lit Coach's Guide to The Writer's Life

Join us Monday on The Lit Coach's Guide when bestselling author Monica Drake (Clown Girl) discusses the role Persistence has played in her writer's life as we kick off December's virtue of the month...Persistence!

Not only am I impressed with Monica's stick-to-it-ness, her novel was difficult to place as it doesn't fit into neat genre holes (quirky fiction); I'm equally impressed by her choice to keep her eyes and attention on the craft not the clock.

See you Monday! Share with your friends!

photo of Monica Drake by Greg Wahl-Stephens

Sunday, November 28, 2010

Q&A With The Lit Coach

I hope those of you who celebrated Thanksgiving are jumping into your week well rested, well fed and ready for a productive week!
Here's the latest round up of questions collected for Q&A with The Lit Coach as we wrap up our monthly focus on Discipline in the writer's life. Thanks to those who submitted.

Q: "I recently read that those who review manuscripts look for any reason to reject them rather than for reasons to accept them because they receive so many. Other than some of the obvious, e.g. no coffee stains, no previously used paper, or no double sided printing, are there clear guidelines that we should follow before submitting? I also heard that anything other than Times New Roman font is passe. It all gets confusing when all you want to do is write a good story."

A: Just as you would follow the rules of grammar and punctuation to appear like a writer who knows his or her craft, so too would you follow the rules of submission to keep an over worked agent reading. And even though these rules are available from numerous sources online and in print, there will always be writers who break them and risk their professional credibility by submitting a novel single spaced or a nonfiction book proposal typed in papyrus - I've seen plenty of both and a hand-written novel to boot!

Here are the rules:

Novels: Double spaced, Times New Roman, 12 point font, 1 inch margins on all four sides of the page. You must include a clean title page, don't get fancy, but do include your name and contact info in one of the corners in a smaller font size. Page numbers are a must and do be sure to let each new chapter begin on a fresh page, not at the tail end of your previous chapter. Make sure there are no blank pages within the work. No typed pages! Find your inner Type A perfectionist! That is all.

Nonfiction: Your proposal can be single spaced but keep your sample chapters double spaced. Stick with Times New Roman, 12 point font with a 1 inch margin on all four sides. Follow closely the nonfiction proposal formula, and you'll make a sharp impression (provided your proposal is well written and compelling). You will need an Overview; Market Analysis; Competition Analysis; Author Bio; Author Promotion; Chapter Outline where you offer in more detail than your Overview, the focus of each chapter; and at least three sample chapters.

This said, even if your novel or nonfiction proposal is mechanically sound, your writing must grab an agent or editor's heart and mind; the premise must be fresh and/or valuable to a large, definable audience.

Do agents and editors look for reasons to reject you? Yes, but try not to take it personally. They simply do not have enough time in the day to read through the hundreds of submissions they receive in a week - so make sure you're sending them quality pages, my dears.

Q: "What are some best practices for balancing work, family and disciplined creative time?"

A: Know your priorities. Your first priority should be focusing on the work that pays the bills to support yourself and your family - I don't believe hunger makes the artist more brilliant. Your second priority should be spending quality time with your family - I don't believe isolation make the artist charmingly eccentric. Third priority is your creative time. Now, what about keeping the house clean, bills paid on time, errands, etc., the detail stuff that needs to get done (writers, this stuff simply needs your attention - handle it before it piles up and totally derails all your best creative efforts)? If you have a spouse/partner/children old enough to co-shoulder responsibility, create a plan where everyone is contributing to your home's smooth running, so you will have more creative time and make the most of it!

Those of you with families to care for...your creative time might only happen before your kids wake up or after they go to bed. So be it. Savor that time - it's yours!

You'll find that with some weekly organization and lots of clear communication with those in your home, you can absolutely balance a fulfilling work/family/creative life. The trick is keeping that routine going. If you have an off day, pick yourself back up and get back to it.

This next question is complied from several I've received over the past couple of months.

Q: "Is it worth it to hire an editor to polish your work before you submit to an agent and should you admit that your work has been professionally edited?"

A: Yes and yes. It's important to first make sure the editor you choose is well established, has a good rack record and a list of successful authors to their credit. If you're choosing to go with an editor who is less established, who is just starting out, ask for professional references and do your homework.

Feel free to disclose in your query letter to agents that your work has been professionally edited and by whom, especially if one of the books they edited is represented or published by an agency or publishing house you hope to be a part of.

Taking every step to not only make sure your work is sound but your approach to the publishing industry is polished, is a very worth while investment in your writing career.

Thanks for your questions! I hope I've answered them clearly. Have a fruitful week, writers!


Wednesday, November 24, 2010

Audacious Confidence

Today, I'm re-posting another TLCG greatest hit, all about confidence in a writer's life. I'm not saying you have to move to LA to find confidence, but you could learn a few things from a some of those Angelinos.

I love Los Angeles. Home to some of the most intelligent, creative, imaginative, passionate, enterprising artists and thinkers (yes, this is still L.A. I’m talking about), you can’t help but feel the positive buzz around you. No matter where you are, Hollywood, Santa Monica, the Palisades, or even the Valley, artists and writers are producing their product. They’re sharing thoughts, giving feedback, connecting, and channeling their passion for writing toward making it happen. They know they’re in a city that expects to be entertained, expects to be enlightened, and they’re ready to give it to ‘em! I must warn you, though. If you’re gonna show up on L.A.’s doorstep with a dream, not only had you better have a good plan, but you better pack your confidence.

Learn From the Master

When Steven Spielberg graduated high school, he took an unpaid job as an assistant at Universal Studios. Fueled by passion and the realization he better get the most out of his time on the set, Spielberg left his outlined sphere and ventured to each and every lot on the set every day for several months. Wearing an understated dark suit with briefcase in tow, he got to know people, absorbed techniques and felt what it was like to make movies. This was what he had most wanted since he was a child. He dressed the part, thought the part and felt the part. The rest is Hollywood history.

Some would call Spielberg’s moves ballsy; you gotta pay your dues to make it to the next echelon. I say he had a level of audacious confidence anyone aspiring to make it in the arts and letters needs to have. This is the confidence you need to possess in order to create, to complete and to sell. And to sell and sell, sell, sell, making your passion for writing a viable career. It takes work. It takes acting as though you already have what you most want.

Attract Through Action!

This isn’t the law of attraction. This isn’t about wishing really hard for something to happen and then following up those wishes with a few good weeks worth of positive thinking only to be left with an occasional good parking space and a shorter wait in line at the bank. If that were the case, I’d have been living my super fabulous pink life in my Barbie Penthouse when I was 7. This is about immersing yourself, mind, soul and even body into the thing you want most – the successful writer’s life. What does that look like? It looks like you acting on your intentions. I recently advised a brilliant writer to quit grabbing snatches of time to jot down good ideas and write, already! She left our conversation with palpable excitement and committed to me she was going to do it! That night, she forwarded me her work, which was an inspired first draft of a beautiful children’s story. Step one, finished. Yes!

Make IT Happen!

Without action, your dream will stay a dream. Without confidence, someone else will show up in their suit and briefcase looking and feeling the part until they are. Don’t get me wrong, there are plenty of bon mots to go around. Plenty of success to be shared, but I want YOU to make it happen. Nothing would make me happier.

Your exercise this week:

Think of how you will feel when you get picked up by the agent of your dreams. Think of how awesome it’ll be when you connect with your inspired editor at the fabulous publishing house that just acquired your novel or nonfiction book. Imagine how thrilled you’ll be when a magazine or newspaper offers you a regular column, syndicated even! Why not? Let these gooey, happy thoughts sink in. Let this energy move you into action fueled by audacious confidence so that feeling will one day be reality.

Have a great, productive week, writers!

Tuesday, November 23, 2010

A Writer's Education: Janna's Path to Publication

Today, I'm re-sposting another blogshop from TLCG greatest hits. Author Janna Cawrse Esarey's path to publication story is truly inspiring. If you haven't yet read this one, see how you too can write a book and try to get in published whilst on a small boat in the middle of the ocean! And you gotta check out her book trailer!

Read this one? Pass it on to your friends - it's a great story! This would be the perfect book to give for the holidays.

Oftentimes the best way to learn how to get your book published is by listening to those who've already walked the path successfully. And Janna Cawrse Esarey's story is an extraordinary one. I became familiar with Janna through her fabulous editor at Simon and Schuster, Michelle Howry. When I invited Michelle onto this blog to talk about Confidence in a writer's life a few months ago, she focused on her author Janna and how Janna confidently approached her market to sell her book, The Motion of the Ocean: 1 Small Boat, 2 Average Lovers & a Woman's Search for The Meaning of Wife. After hearing this and reading through Janna's website, I had to know more about her path, because let's face it - writing a book, finding an agent and publisher is not for the faint of heart. Doing most of that on a small boat in the middle of an ocean takes an absolute belief in self and iron clad persistence - both of which are must-have necessities along your path to publication.

Here's Janna's story:

Before I became a writer, I was a high school English teacher who always enjoyed writing but never. Found. The time. (Sound familiar?) So when I quit my job and set sail on what was supposed to be the most romantic honeymoon ever (two years across the Pacific in a very small boat), I began writing in earnest: journals, blogs, S.O.S. notes—and a novel of which I have 129 versions of the first paragraph. I quickly realized I didn’t know what the heck I was doing. And, being in the middle of the ocean, I had no access to writing classes, writing books, online resources, or, most important, a writing group. (Hint: writers need these.) So I decided to follow that old adage—write what you know; I wrote about our voyage for magazines and anthologies.

I make this sound easy. It wasn’t. I got many rejections. But I kept writing, kept sending out my work from our boat’s high-pitched radio modem (dee-DEEDLEE-dee), and once we reached Hong Kong, I joined a writing group. Over time, I built that writerly thing called my platform, a.k.a. the ways in which one reaches an audience. And I discovered who my true audience was: smart, can-do women who were dealing with the same issues ashore that I was afloat—marriage, sex, ticking clocks, balance, self, love. Enter the idea for The Motion of the Ocean, a story of love and romance, culture and identity, set against the backdrop of sailing the world.

So I wrote a nonfiction book proposal (hint: this is how you sell nonfiction), pitched my idea at several writers’ conferences (hint: this is how you avoid the slush pile), and found an agent (hint: this involved many more rejections). My lovely agent sold my book idea to a lovely editor at Simon & Schuster, who gave me seven months to write the dang thing. Yikes! I rallied the granny-nannies, went into my writer’s cave, and wrote a chapter a week, plus time for revision. I delivered the manuscript a month before my second daughter was born, and about a year later The Motion of the Ocean was born. It’s now happily in its second printing.

TLC: Janna gives us lots of great learning points here, but most importantly she points out that over time and failed pieces, she discovered who her true audience was and how to reach them. This is key, writers. Before you sit down to write your heart out, know who you want to connect with. Who is your audience? How do you identify with them and what will they learn from you? Is your work so compelling/thoughtful/entertaining/informative that thousands will want to read it?

I recently attended a lit festival in my city and listened to a very successful author suggest "the word 'genre' is all marketing." I know as a writer and literature lover some of you may hate to be forced to classify the books you love and write under certain categories. Categorizing your audience may seem even more ridiculous. It may seem limiting...but look at it this way, we've been cataloging "stuff" to make sense of whatever it is for a very long time. We put a name on this stuff so we can identify it. Become familiar with it. It's not just about a group of overworked publishing marketing execs sitting high above the hustle of Manhattan plotting how they're going to diminish the true breadth of your literary masterpiece by pigeonholing it.

When you write, listen to your heart. Be passionate about your story or information you wish to impart. Craft it like a true artisan. But also consider your audience. Knowing WHO they are and WHAT they like is your first step toward creating something truly viable in a sea of commercial fiction and nonfiction published annually.

Your Exercise This Week: Janna mentions pitching her book at writers' conferences was key to her success. Pitching your novel at conferences to real, live agents and emailing your pitch letter from the safety of your own home are two totally different experiences. Take the anxiety you may feel out of the conference situation by knowing you're there to make friends. Agents will remember the personable writers...those who are relaxed yet professional...and most of all, confident! Sure, you're going to come across prickly agents who will totally unnerve you despite your best efforts...don't take their character flaws personally, my dears. Move on.

Do you have your in-person pitch ready? Is it under a minute? Does it hook the listener? Think of lit agent, Kristin Nelson's spot on pitch paragraph advice from last week...can you translate that into a comfortable, confident in-person pitch? Try it!

Of course, let me know how it goes!

Any pitch success stories you want to share? Do tell!

Have an enlightening week, writers! Thank you for joining us.

Janna Cawrse Esarey is the author of the Indie-bestselling memoir, The Motion of the Ocean: 1 Small Boat, 2 Average Lovers, & a Woman’s Search for the Meaning of Wife (Simon & Schuster). Recommended on “The Today Show,” it’s the humorous, true story of a woman who sets sail on a very small boat with a very new husband—only to find their relationship heading for the rocks. Or, as Library Journal put it, it’s “a well-written, rollicking high-seas adventure [for] anyone who enjoys a good love story.” Janna was selected as a 2008 Jack Straw writer and blogs about work-life-love balance for the Seattle P-I at “Happily Even After.” Watch her book trailer at

Sunday, November 21, 2010

A Writer's Education: Luring an Agent and The Not-So-Secret Handshake

Happy Thanksgiving week, U.S. readers! No new blogs this week as I'll be focused on family and co-creating a killer T-day menu. Instead, I'm re-posting some of the most popular TLCG blogshops and whatever else I feel might supplement your week as a helpful side dish.

Today, I repost a prior blogshop featuring the absolutely wonderful literary agent, Kristin Nelson.

Here's to your agent luring success!

Despite the many resources available online and on the shelves, I'm still asked "Ok, so how do I find an agent? Really, what's the secret?" When I was an agent, I contributed to two books on the subject, Making the Perfect Pitch: How to Catch a Literary Agent's Eye by Katharine Sands and Author 101: Bestselling Secrets from Top Agents by Rick Frishman and Robyn Spizman. There are several books like these out there with equally great advice and most of what you read from all those agents is accurate: there is a certain formula to pitching an agent and you must stick to the formula. Knowing the right people certainly helps get you in the door, but successfully landing the right agent boils down you possessing or exhibiting three things:

1) Great Writing!

2) Strong Author Platform!

3) Emotional and Professional Accountability!

We've talked about great writing and strong author platform in previous blogshops. We're going to tackle emotional and professional accountability later this month. Today we're talking about how to approach and attract an agent.

I realize when you've got someone there with you giving you all the seemingly secret ins and outs of finding an agent and anything else pub world (books not beer) related, something clicks and you get it. That's why I invited Kristin Nelson into this blogshop on how to approach an agent...the right way as we kick off Author Education month on The Lit Coach's Guide.

Kristin is one of the most successful agents in the country. A shining example that literary life does indeed exist (and thrive!) west of the Hudson River, Nelson started her own agency in Denver, Colorado in 2002. Her client roster boasts many bestselling and notable authors and she's a regular fixture at several renown writers' conferences.

We're here with you right now to help you approach an agent successfully. Kristin's word is gospel, so look no farther, take notes and take heed, my dears.

I approached Kristin at least a month ago about coming on the blog to share a little expertise with you all, but she contributed well above and beyond what I asked. She's that way.

I asked Kristin, "What's the secret to attracting an agent? How can an author lure an agent to request their manuscript?"

Kristin: Most new writers think that landing an agent is about a secret handshake. If they only knew how to do it, they could get their foot in the door. Book deals and fame and fortune would follow. Or, they mistakenly assume that the only way to get an agent is via a referral.

In actuality, all a new writer needs is a terrific query letter (although if you have a referral, that never hurts). Wait! Before you say you don’t believe me, I checked out Nelson Literary Agency’s roster of authors. With about four or five exceptions, the majority of our clients came to us via a query letter—including New York Times bestselling author Jamie Ford, who has graced the NYT’s regular and extended bestseller list for almost a year now. His career began with a simple query letter in our inbox and so can yours.

Ah, now you are thinking, “So there is a magic way to write a query letter and if I just knew that, then I could land the agent and the fabulous book deal.”

I wouldn’t call it magic, but I’m certainly happy to share the secret of how to write a good one.
You have to nail the pitch paragraph in the query letter. If you do that, I guarantee an agent will request sample pages. [Insider secret: When agents read query letters, we automatically skip down to the pitch paragraph. If that grabs our attention, then we go back and read the rest of the letter. If it doesn’t, we might glance at the author creds but most often, we just hit the button to send our standard rejection. Here at NLA, we get 150 query letters a day. We don’t have time to do anything else but read the pitch first.]

So you can see how important that one paragraph can be! I’ll teach you how to nail that but when you submit the sample pages, whether you get a request for a full is up to you and the quality of your writing.

Most writers stumble over the pitch because it’s such a daunting task to take 300+ pages of a novel and try to boil that down to one or two pithy paragraphs. On top of this task, that little paragraph has to leave the agent dying to read more. A herculean undertaking, right?
It would be if that was what you actually had to do but here’s the secret. You don’t have to take 300 pages and cram it into one paragraph. All you really need is the first 30 or 40 pages of your manuscript. The core of your pitch paragraph is right there in the beginning of your story. And another secret to writing the pitch? Make it read like the jacket flap or back cover copy you see on an already published book.

In other words, another title for this blog entry could be: Writing Jacket Copy 101.
See, your pitch paragraph is the jacket or back cover copy of your unpublished novel. If you want to master your pitch, start at your local bookstore or library or go online and grab copy from similar books in your genre. Analyze those paragraphs. You’ll get the rhythm and a sense of how many sentences it actually takes. For the record, most cover copy is anywhere from 8 to 10 sentences long. That’s it. Don’t believe me? Grab the nearest book and check it out for yourself.

But back to the core of your pitch paragraph. You only need the first 30 pages of your novel because all cover copy is shaped around the main event (also called the inciting incident or in my terminology, the plot catalyst) that begins the novel and without it, the story could not move forward. In other words, the event must happen or you have no story to tell.

Two key things to keep in mind:

1. Plot catalysts are always events. It’s not an introduction to a character or a theme. It’s a plot element.

2. If you can’t find it easily in the first 30 pages, you know your manuscript is in trouble and a revision is in your future. The biggest beginning writer mistake I see is that the writer will often incorporate a ton of back story or related information that’s crucial for the writer to know (but the reader doesn’t need it) in the first 50 to 100 pages of a work. The plot catalyst ends up on page 80—way too far into the novel to do the writer any good.

So let’s give an example. Since I mentioned Jamie Ford, let’s look at his novel HOTEL ON THE CORNER OF BITTER AND SWEET.

The opening plot catalyst is that our main character, 56-year old Henry Lee, stumbles into a press conference being held on the steps of the Panama Hotel in Seattle. The owner of the hotel has discovered in the basement the belongings of 33 Japanese families who were sent to internment camps during WWII. In front of the journalists, she unfurls a Japanese parasol that she has found. Henry instantly recognizes it as belonging to Keiko, a Japanese girl he knew and loved back in the day. That discovery propels him on a journey to find her and in doing so, he must confront the choices he did or did not make all those years ago during the war.
That’s it. If you look at the back cover copy for this novel, it will highlight this event. Without it, Henry Lee wouldn’t be forced to confront his past and there would be no story to tell. That parasol has to be discovered first.

Now, go back and read the first 30 pages of your own work. The plot catalyst has to be there. Once you find it, you craft your pitch paragraph for your query letter around it. And if it’s not there, you’d better start looking for it. If that key element doesn’t come until page 50, page 80, or page 100, then you know you have a problem and your novel more than likely needs a major revision to bring that plot catalyst forward.

For more discussion and examples, check out my blog Pubrants. I did a whole online workshop called Agent Kristin’s Query Pitch Workshop (see right side bar of blog).

Happy writing!

TLC: Ok, so not only did Kristin give you great advice on how to pitch...but pointed out if you're having trouble nailing down your main plot catalyst, it's time to take another look at your work to decide if it's truly ready for prime time.

The exercise of writing your own book jacket copy is a favorite of mine. What better way to gain clarity about HOW you want to pitch it to an agent...not to mention this is a great visualization tool to help keep you motivated on the big dream - your published book! Remember a few weeks ago how you dreamed big and worked backward uncovering all the steps you took to land your book deal? Pitching your book is no doubt near the beginning. Follow Kristin's advice and see where it takes you. And let us know!!!

Good luck, writers!

Your Exercise This Week: Stuck on how to pitch your novel or nonfiction proposal? Write your book jacket! Head to your local bookseller (I'm big on field trips) and check out like genre work. Find some really juicy book jacket writing you gravitate toward and take notes. What's the tone? Are you drawn to the promise of action, romance, suspense or a slice of life story? Why? If it's nonfiction, what tips and info is the author promising? Why is this THE book that will solve your problem or be the definitive book on a particular subject matter? What makes you connect? How will you make readers connect with your book? Try on the voice of those book jacket writers...then find your own. Make an agent want your manuscript!

About Kristin Nelson

Kristin established the Nelson Literary Agency in 2002. In such a short time, she has sold over a 100 books to all the major publishers. She has landed several film deals and has contracted foreign rights on behalf of her clients in many territories. She specializes in representing commercial fiction (mainstream, women’s fiction, romance, science fiction, fantasy, young adult & middle grade) and literary fiction with a commercial bent. In general, she does not handle nonfiction projects with the exception of an occasional memoir.

Clients include New York Times, USA Today, Wall Street Journal bestselling author Ally Carter (I’d Tell You I Love You But Then I’d Have to Kill You and Heist Society), New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Jamie Ford (Hotel On The Corner Of Bitter And Sweet), New York Times bestselling author Gail Carriger (Changeless), New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Simone Elkeles (Rules Of Attraction), USA Today bestselling author Courtney Milan (This Wicked Gift), and RITA-award winners Sherry Thomas (Not Quite A Husband) and Linnea Sinclair (Gabriel’s Ghost). Member: AAR, RWA, SFWA, SCBWI.

Please visit our website before submitting and also check out Kristin’s popular blog

Friday, November 19, 2010

Call Out For Your Questions, Q&A with The Lit Coach

It's time for another round of Q&A with The Lit Coach! Send me one question related to writing, your writer's life, publishing, agents, book selling, etc. and I'll answer them the last week of November. Click here and scroll to the bottom for my contact info.

There will be no new blog Thanksgiving week. I'll re-post a greatest hit from TLC blogshops. But I'll still be collecting your questions!

To my U.S. readers, have a warm, delicious, happy Thanksgiving with your families and friends.

p.s. new picture, new chair, same lit coach.

Tuesday, November 16, 2010

Discipline: Time Management Through Non-Negotiables

I'd say a major challenge we face as least those of us with families, jobs, and other lack of time. We're trying to squeeze it in anywhere we get a break from our busy (not crazy!), full day. And then sometimes, when we get that break, that actual hour or so of freedom, we're too exhausted to whip up a few pages of brilliance let alone five intelligible sentences.

But others seem to do it. Others seem to have the ability to actually make time - create more of it from just the 24 hours guaranteed us on a daily basis! They're living busy, productive lives where brilliance seems to flow effortlessly from one project to the next. They're inspired, connected to a higher creative source, at peace when all around them their peers are hustling to barely make a deadline. What's the secret?

Ok, so as a writer you know brilliance doesn't just happen - it takes work, and yes, time. Lots of it. The others, from whom all brilliance and zen seem to flow, just manage their time better. They don't have any more of it than you do. The difference is, they put a premium value on their time as they see it directly impacting their overall productivity and quality of life. And they expect others to respect their time as well, or they simply remove themselves from the equation. It's a non-negotiable. People, not just writers, who respect their worth and their talent develop a system of dos and dont's - their own set of non-negotiables that keep them from steering too far off path. The beauty is, anyone can do this. You can start doing this today. Here's how.

Be Conscious!

The first step of developing your own time management non-negotiables, is being truly aware of how you spend your minutes. Aside from your major responsibilities and obligations, where do you spend your free time? What's the first thing you do after you've come home from a busy day, connected with your family/pets/parents, prepared dinner, wrap up some general housekeeping, etc. Plop exhausted in front of one screen or another to unwind? Or chat with friends? Hang out at a bar? Shop? Change all your status updates? Some of these activities don't seem like huge time vacuums, but over time, the minutes add up to real hours. Time that could be spent writing or reading (which I also consider writing). Good writers know the importance of every word they put on the page. It has a purpose. If they have too many words or not the right kind of words, they edit. Your time has meaning and purpose, too. Edit your time as you would your writing.


This may sound totally anti-creative to some of you, but to really get the most out of your week, plan it out before the week begins; Sunday is ideal. First, think about what you want to accomplish. What do you need to do to achieve a goal, complete your work, make an important connection, finish piece - the actions that will move your writing/writing career forward. Next, list everything you must do day to day. School, work, kids' activities, etc., fall into this category. Your second level of must dos are things like cooking and maintenance/housekeeping. These things take up a lot of time, so if you can manage hiring someone to clean house a few times a month, do it. Or delegate household responsibilities, if there's more than one of you able to share the workload (my husband is truly awesome in sharing the heft with me, but cooking is my gig). Create a daily plan at the beginning of the week clearly outlining who is responsible for completing what task and make sure they're sticking to it. This frees up hours of your time during the week.

Ok, so getting past the major responsibilities and must-dos, that leaves you with your free time to plan. Plan your family time, spouse/partner time, pet time, parent time, friend time, you get the picture. And make the most of that time you're spending with your loved ones! Next, plan your writing time. Why did I put this behind connecting with people? Because community is important. It feeds you and you learn from it. It's also important for you to participate in a community, even if your community consists of just you, your neighbor and your pet. Whatever community you're a part of, engage fully...then come back to your work focused and ready to rock!

Last, plan your writing time. By writing time I mean, writing, reading and researching. The best writers...the prize-winning ones, the ones that land on the best-seller list, read. They read the work of their peers, and they read books in genres that may have nothing to do with what they're writing. By reading, you're learning more about writing by appreciating or not appreciating how others do it. This is ESPECIALLY important if you're writing within a genre because you must know what else is out there, know the formula.

Plan your TV and screen (this doesn't include writing on your computer) time wisely. I rarely watch TV and limit my online time to blogging, updating my Lit Coach Facebook page and updating my other online sources when my blogs are up. Or, I'm researching the trades and other publishing news and a few blogs I regularly check. I don't check email every five minutes. That's about it. "Just a few minutes" often turns into a whole hour (or more) in front of a screen, plan this empty calorie time wisely.

NOW. While it's important to be flexible in your planning as life does love to throw a curve ball once in a while (for example, my son has pneumonia this week), this to-do list becomes your non-negotiable weekly schedule. The best thing you can do for yourself, for your creative mind, is stick to it, or as closely as possible. When others come into your picture and demand your time in some form or another, it's your decision to give them that time or not. Whatever you decide, you own that decision.

Your Action: Plan out your week as discussed above and try your new non-negotiable system for one week. See where it takes you. Don't forget to share this plan with those you live with so everyone is aware of their responsibilities.

Bonus Points: Aim to be on time: to work; to school; to lunches; to meetings; to scheduled phone calls. Not only does this keep you on track, it boosts your credibility.

Sunday, November 14, 2010

Discipline: Enough with The Crazies!

"It is not enough to have great qualities; we should also have the management of them." La Rochefoucauld

Ok, so for the sake of this post, let's swap qualities for talent.

There is a lament shared by those of us who work with writers (teachers; consultants(me); agents(used to be me); editors; and publishers (please forgive if I've left out a group)). It is the one that usually starts with: He was such a brilliant writer but couldn't get out of his own way! or She has the potential of becoming the next [insert name of favorite brilliant author here] but she always misses her deadline!

This lament ends with the reality that the brilliant writer will never fully realize their potential because they lack the clarity of mind and desire to order their lives in such a way that only their best will flow from them. The best effort. The best success. The best writing career they could have ever imaged for themselves. All because they couldn't make good choices. Couldn't manage their time well. Couldn't manage their talent.

This is why I do what I do - consult writers; not just about the business of publishing - that's just the half of it! I also talk with writers about the challenges in their lives and help them find ways through them so they can realize their own success to the fullest. I was so tired of seeing brilliant writers fail in their careers or not fully enjoy their potential because they couldn't manage their time, their attitude, their choices, their life! There were so many excuses! Here's the most popular; I'm having a crazy day/week/month/life! I'm crazy busy! Oh, to hang with it, as my grandma would say! I've really begun to dislike that word, crazy. It's a bad word. Crazy has been the culprit of missed deadlines, lost contracts, beyond rude tardiness or no shows to important meetings/lunches/phone calls/signings, etc. (And yes, some of this has to do with integrity and choices, but we'll get to that another post.) So, you'd think crazy means things are out of control right? As in, too many things out of your control. It's crazy's fault! Well. There are 10 definitions of the word crazy (as found on and not one of them define or allude to crazy as a definite or general loss of control.

The root of too much "crazy" is a general lack of organization. You could also be making better choices that keep you on a positive path toward producing your best work and/or finding your way toward publication. Pain and simple, my dears. Yep, it's time for the mama talk.

Ok, let's break this down. Let's look at organization first. If you're totally type A and a minimalist, you can skip the rest. If, on the contrary, you're like me, you'd rather watch a Hannah Montana marathon than organize your desk space, clean out your email inbox, and put stuff away where you can, you know, find it when you need it. Sigh. I know. You'd rather be writing, researching or connecting - the fun part of creativity! But writers, you've got to strive to become more organized. Because when you are, my dears, life just clicks into place almost effortlessly. It's a beautiful thing. And the benefit of having a place for everything and managing what comes in and out is that you're not wasting time searching for whatever it is you've lost...which usually dominoes into you being late or feeling frazzled, which tumbles into you having a "crazy" totally less than brilliantly productive day. What a waste!

So, if you can control something that would streamline your entire life, wouldn't you? Or do you like the feeling of being out of control...which does nothing for your writing, FYI. A disorganized life show up in your prose. Most agents can spot this dead on.

Your Action: Take a day or at least a few hours to totally organize your working space and email inbox. Today, if possible. Toss or donate what you don't need or haven't used. Keep what you always need or use and find a permanent home for those things. Keep them there and put them back when you've used them! My mom is the queen of this. Aren't all moms?

This is a totally messy process and that's ok. So is editing. You'll eventually find the right clean, organized workspace (major extra credit if you tackle the rest of your house). When you do, strive to keep it clean and let that positive, clutter-free energy flow into your writing. And music is important. Listen to music while you're doing this. Mondays are my organizing days. I think I'll stream in some Stevie Wonder...

And, hey, wield the word crazy only when truly appropriate.

Tomorrow we'll take a look at how making the right choices positively affect your writing and your writer's life.


Sunday, November 7, 2010

Discipline: Your Choice

Last week we dipped our toe into considering the role of Discipline in a writer's life. John Parsley shared with you from his experience as an editor with Little, Brown (one of the most selective publishing companies in New York) the stark reality of just how soon your writing's gotta grab an agent or editor's attention - on page one. Keeping their attention from start to finish takes excellent craftsmanship and an artistic touch of the pen, so to speak, that sets you apart from the pack.

If you've learned anything from the several best-selling or award-winning authors I've brought on to blogshop, their main message has been - becoming a good writer takes time, unrelenting dedication and persistence. None of which happens without some form of discipline. Whether you want to call it discipline or something else is up to you. But IT must be present in your writer's life if you want to enjoy any level of success. Think of the D word as your own daily practices that keep you on a good know, that one where you're creatively productive, mostly organized, punctual and content, no HAPPY with the direction you're headed! That sounds awesome, doesn't it? Yeah, I'll take more of that stuff!

Sounds ideal right? It is and it can be your reality, but it takes time and focus. Getting good at anything does.


Let's take a look at a more common scenario. After reading a few good 'how-to' articles about pitching an agent or writing a bullet proof synopsis you plunk down in front of your computer ready to set the literary world a'blaze with your bon mots and can-do attitude until...something happens. You get a phone call/email/text that brings some kind of negativity your way; you start doubting that this book thing is really going to take off, leaving you forever in a job you hate; the baby wakes up - great, there goes your writing time. Whoa! What happened to all that good mojo you started out with?

My dears, if you want success as a writer, as a human on this green earth, you must learn to productively deal with what life brings to your table. No excuses. Your actions determine your success - not your education, age, race, ethnicity, sexual orientation, religion, socio-economic situation. How you were raised does not determine your success. What side of the tracks you grew up on does not determine your success. Your lack of emotional/financial/parental/spousal support does not determine your success.

You do. I believe in responsible free will. You have choice in this life and you make choices every day that either keep you from succeeding or move you toward success. Let's take that negative call/email/text you received. How did you deal with it? Did you let it derail you? Will we find you plopped in front of the T.V. with a bag of chips watching some mindless reality show? Or did you deal with it as productively as possible and move on to your more important task at hand? How about your own doubts about this writing gig and your current less-than-fabulous job situation? I know many of you would rather be writing than having to clock in full time to a job that isn't "you." What can I say about this? Until your writing pays the bills, you'll have to either continue to clock in to your job or find one that better suits you and your talents while you build your writing platform. And don't let self-doubt keep you from moving forward. If you're constantly striving to be a better writer, then you're succeeding in real time! Writing around your kids' nap times? Honey, this is the story of most my adult life! I understand totally how difficult it is to work around your children's schedules, whatever they are, but realize this - you don't get a do-over with your kids. Choose to be present and engaged in their lives. That may mean for now, you write at night or early in the morning before they wake up. Let that be your sacred writing time and let nothing get in the way of it.

What does choice have to do with Discipline? Everything! If you want success as a writer, you must choose writing over T.V.; choose reading over hanging out at the bar; workshopping over self-loathing; and connecting with other got-it-goin'-on writers over fretting about the economy. And yes you'll have to plan your life around this. Once you totally realize your actions determine your success, that you have a choice in most everything you do, you'll understand the value of your precious writer's time...and your life! Accountability is the foundation of Discipline.

Your Action: This is long winded, bear with me. We've all heard inspiring stories where the underdog overcomes great obstacles to become successful in their own way. I love these stories! It's what keeps me keeping on. Hearing these triumph over every obstacle stories reminds me there are no excuses in this life if you want something badly enough. I draw inspiration from my grandfather who grew up in a coal mining family in the North of England (Tow Law, Co. Durham, if you're interested) during the first half of the 20th century. Rather than let his socio-economic history determine his fate, he let his passion guide him toward a master's degree in philosophy and Doctor of Divinity. He enjoyed a long, fulfilling career as an Episcopalian minister and later Bishop in the United States. His story keeps me stretching myself, my ability every day.

How about you? What keeps you inspired? What no excuses story real or imagined keeps you moving forward?

Thursday, November 4, 2010

Next on The Lit Coach's Guide and More

November is all about Discipline on The Lit Coach's Guide to The Writer's Life. Those of you participating in NaNoWriMo know what I'm talking about, right? But Discipline means more than sitting down to write; rather, it's a collection of positive, productive habits practiced on a daily basis that ultimately lead to your own success. We'll explore what all this means in detail this month.

I'm rounding up your questions for another session of Q&A with The Lit Coach! Please send me ONE question about anything pertaining to writing, the writer's life, publishing, literary agents and I'll do my best to answer them at the end of this month.

New Lit Coach Services page has been added on TLCG. Check out my services menu and let me know how I can best help you!

Have a great weekend, writers!


Monday, November 1, 2010

The Art and Craft of Discipline: Page One with LOST's John Parsley

If you've followed this blog for more than a month, you know I dedicate each month to a virtue successful writers employ in their writer's life. In past months, we've covered Passion, Confidence, Clarity, Education and Goals - with guest authors, agents and other publishing industry experts sharing their perspectives as they relate to the virtue along the way.

This month is all about the D word. Discipline. I can almost see some of you cringing, but alas, here we are. There's a reason I didn't bang out my first blogs with this virtue because it takes time to appreciate and develop. The most successful writers learn discipline is their best friend if they want to succeed in getting their book published; their poetry or short stories placed in literary journals and magazines. A disciplined writer knows in order to be recognized, they must strive for mastery of craft no matter how long or hard the revision process, among other aspects of the writing business.

That's our focus for this post - it's all about the writing. And it needs to "get good" on page one!

I invited John Parsley to share his perspective on what gets the green light not only as an editorial director for the amazing online e-zine LOST, but as an editor with Little, Brown - a highly selective traditional publishing company in New York.

Here's what John had to say:

It is July first and fifty-one degrees above zero.

The explosion must have been second only to the A-bomb.

My first meal as a luxury editor was Tuscan boar, shot in the vineyards that once served as the front lines of the wars between Sienna and Florence.

It's two below this morning, but there's no wind.

If you want to read more, it's not because of anything I've written. These are the first lines from two books I’ve acquired and from two essays in the fall 2010 issue of LOST Magazine—all of which I started reading in proposal and never put down once.

I acquire nonfiction books, but I’m the second person your first sentence needs to hook. After it’s sold a literary agent, who’s sold me on a proposal, I need to sell our sales, publicity, and marketing teams; they need to sell bookstores and the media; and we all need to sell readers. The best publishing scenarios have readers selling, too—to their friends and family, when they love a book. There are no less than five major sales pitches that helped bring any book to your local bookstore.

Each of those readers is buried in other submissions, pitches, and possibilities. Their attentions are under siege, so book proposals and manuscripts don’t have time to “get really good" in chapter two, or on page 40, or once you can really tell what's going on. No—they already have to be good by then, from the first words on the first page.

We're all looking for first lines that give energy, rather than taking it. That show a writer in control of language, and of the proposal's direction. That place us in the book and “do” something, making us want to read another sentence in the hope it meets the promise of the first.

I've acquired books by emerging writers and accomplished authors. I've acquired serious journalism, narrative, memoir, biography, history, humor, and fiction. The only thing these very different book proposals shared was a great opening.

And that, perhaps, is the point: whether it’s a book proposal or a finished book, there's no stronger selling tool for me than a first sentence that lets me pitch it in the most honest, easiest way: by saying, "it's good from the very start." In that sense, it’s the sentences that did the hard work, and the proposals that sold themselves.

TLC: My most popular blog post is A Writer's Education: Luring An Agent and The Not-So-Secret Handshake with fab lit agent, Kristin Nelson. This blog post is all about capturing the attention of an to get your foot in the door with a well crafted pitch (assuming the product is totally polished and ready to go). As a former agent, 98% of the writing that came my way was not fully developed despite the promises they made in their pitch. The WHOLE package must be great: pitch and product. My dears, please spend less time worrying about agents. Take the time you need to make your writing "get good" from page one so an agent can't possibly refuse you!

Have a fruitful week, writers!

Any NaNoWriMos reading? Stay focused and good luck!


About the Contributor:

John Parsley is an editor at Little, Brown and the editorial director of
LOST Magazine.